Wrong train
By PipMic
Fri, 06 Aug 2010
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5 comments
Always rushing.
Times running out.
A constant worry,
hmm…a nagging doubt.
Doors open.
The passengers jostle.
I jump into train,
I hear a chuckle.
Train is speeding.
Destination as usual.
We all agree,
journey’s a gruel.
We settle ok.
The silence returns.
Everyone’s engrossed,
there are no concerns
My doubt returns.
I scream out “shit!”
I look at the map,
I feel like a twit.
Some heads turn.
Some have refused.
The chuckler grins,
very amused.
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New Pipmic I liked this,I
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Pipmic
I liked this,I had a chuckle to.
Some heads turn.
Some have refused
The chuckler grins,
very amused.
Love it all,very polished
I am still learning? By other's
great works..
julie xx
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i like the way you write!
Permalink Submitted by darkenwolf on
i like the way you write! love it ;)
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haha thats me too!
haha thats me too!
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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