Fire

By jleehamil81

Wed, 15 Sep 2010
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I am a thief of fire.
Abound with multifarious
life experience
I have been exposed since birth
dissolution of an innocence
the murder of purity marked by a crown of blood
a trade of bliss for life.
I want to hold my fire and share my secret.
Come closer and I will show you how.
I have embraced my dissonance and have given faculty to illusory superiority to be relative to everything.
I want to capture beauty and record it
then set it free in specific places. My only hope is to inspire you as you have inspired me.
before I trade life for bliss
I was a thief of fire.

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Comments

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Some really strong and interesting images here, especially: 'I have been exposed since birth dissolution of an innocence the murder of purity marked by a crown of blood a trade of bliss for life.' Magic xxx

 

Submitted by jleehamil81 on
thank you, I need to edit it I think. I didnt think too many would understand that part. Its for your own to interpret...but do you know what I am describing here? thanks again I appreciate your comment :) J.lee Hamil

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