Promise to Mum

By heidi

Fri, 01 Oct 2010
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I promise you Mum,
I will grow to be strong.
And think of the good times,
And none of the wrong.

I promise you Mum,
I will look after Dad.
And cheer him right up,
If he ever feels sad.

I promise you Mum,
Your memories shall stay.
In our thoughts and our minds,
Never pushed away.

I promise you Mum,
Our family will thrive.
And stay close together,
To keep you alive.

I promise you Mum,
That whatever I do.
I will ask myself,
Would you do it too?

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
Hello Heidi - I really like the simplicity of this poem

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a lovely poem to a mum, it's so nice to hear a daughter think so thoughtfully of her mum. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I liked this too. Yes the simplicity ;)

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I think this is stunning, emotional and sincere, all perfectly enhanced by the simplicity of it. A great poem.