Breaming

By Kahdai

Mon, 15 Nov 2010

7 comments

Only a breathing
and dreaming day
and I'm breaming
for all I am, do
nothing else for
a moment or four
thinking of you.

Dreaming of you,
breathing you in
hard to believe,
this is'nt a sin
yet, I know sure
as rainfalls now
you are my mine.

When night bring
me a cold winter
to make mornings
frost be thicker
am wishing for I
will be breaming
you by my night.

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Mon, 2010-11-15 17:02

'breaming' - love your word, Kahdai! A wonderful poem you have here ;) Magic xxx

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Mon, 2010-11-15 17:03

I was just going to say the same thing, and Magic pipped me to the post;-) Tina xx

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Mon, 2010-11-15 17:30

:) thankyou both ^^ xxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Mon, 2010-11-15 19:09

Yes it is a very good poem with a wonderful new word. Well done Kahdai ;)Pia

Permalink Submitted by shoe on Tue, 2010-11-16 18:44

A breathing, dreaming day - lovely, like the cold winter ending too.

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Tue, 2010-11-16 20:35

Wow thankyou all! ^^ I actually found out after its to do with fishing and a hull/keel cleaning method ..' oops, glad it made sense anyway K xxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Permalink Submitted by Kahdai on Tue, 2010-11-16 20:38

Thanks lovely comment shoe :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "