Crave To Save (I.P.)

By MistressDistress

Mon, 13 Dec 2010
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3 comments
 

I crave to save
your life, my love
But you are so
bent on turning your steps
towards death's darkened valley

Like a lodestone
marked for the slaughter
you wander
light-footed
bright-eyed
while my nervous hands
try to steer you from the gloom

Why
do you insist on clutching
to swathes of grey mist
straining your eyes for the ghost-light
when behind
the mortal world shines bright?

Certificate U
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi MisstressDistress, I can so relate to this brilliant poem, knowing that it is trying to steer someone into the light, rather than the darkness. A very good IP. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
This is fantasatic! :D nice one Lehmi xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by shoe on
I enjoyed it too, great take on the I.P.