White journey
By Beeme
Sat, 18 Dec 2010
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Hurriedly I walked
in a shawl of fine,
glittering air.
As ivory I stood
-a target, hunted
by the cool kiss
of the wind.
Ice in the trees,
mist in the air,
floating just out
of reach.
The church caped
with fresh snow-
a beacon of light.
I reached the end
of my road, just
before the tyres
struggled to grip
or the snow posed
a threat.
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this is lovely beeme. I
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is lovely beeme. I especially like the first stanza - beautiful!
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Very atmopsheric, Beeme! I
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Very atmopsheric, Beeme! I love the way you've conjured the image of the cold and the snow. A real winter wonderland you've painted. Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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Stunning, loved the first
Stunning, loved the first verse especially, and these lines:
a target, hunted
by the cool kiss
of the wind.
J x
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beautifuly description of
beautifuly description of snow feeling :)
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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