For you

By Beeme

Mon, 21 Mar 2011
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6 comments
 

I drop my skin
falling…
like a shattered chandelier.
My body
thought to be ornate
pristine from birth,
yellows with age.
A light-bulb
flickering…
in a blank room.
A blindfolded sculpture
keeping its eyes
open for you.

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Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
This is really good beeme, blind-folded sculpture image is brilliant. Did you mean like chandler bing or chandelier? :-)

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou very much Fatboy :-] Really glad you liked this, changed the typo. :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Enjoyed, Beeme;-) My only suggestion would be to put 'blindfolded sculpture' on the same line. Blindfolded, one word, actually;-) Some good imagery here. Tina xx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Tina, happy you enjoyed :) xx Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is a beautiful image beeme: I drop my skin falling… like a shattered chandelier.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Insert! I'm glad you thought so :) xxx

k.