Chardonnay and Me
By Silver Spun Sand
Wed, 30 Mar 2011
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Beside a pond, stiller
than a dream, we set
our picnic basket down,
she and I.
Overhead...
like silver streamers,
drifting Nimbus
courts the limestone
of the crags.
A frowning horizon
heralds the sweep...
a distant susurrus
of wings, grows
ever closer; a flock
of geese fret
a sullen skyline.
Nothing more I want.
Only this – right now;
a duo of amorous swans
defining the quietude
of a jet-black pool.
Then, she suggests
we trample down
some tangled tufts
of Meadow Foxtail;
bruise a patch or two
of Fragrant Orchid...
A sudden squall;
a passing shower...
Those velvet thighs,
so wet...so cool;
from a chalice
coloured cream
I drink my fill –
sweet Chardonnay.
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hello sand lady Lovely this,
hello sand lady
Lovely this, so visual.
Written from your little hill I hope?
take care
ScoZen
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I agree, you paint such a
I agree, you paint such a vivid picture, very beautiful imagery :)
Beeme xx
k.
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Full on sensory swoop here
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Full on sensory swoop here Tina, clever use of sound to build the sensual atb Lena ;) x
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Hi Tina, how do you manage
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
how do you manage to come up with such amazingly,
beautiful words? this poem just blew me away from
start to finish.
Thankyou.
Jenny.
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Definitely go with the
Definitely go with the `sensory swoop' - nice one Tina.
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You know exactly which words
You know exactly which words to pick Tina- this is very beautiful
;)Pia
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Tina, just wanted to say how
Tina, just wanted to say how beautiful this poem is... so delicate and sensitively written. When it comes to writing about love (and sex) you have such a light touch, yet one feels such impact too.
Fantastic, well done!
sue
TVR
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