Longing sickness

By Kahdai

Mon, 11 Apr 2011
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4 comments
 

Can't leave you
you know I feel
belong between
homeland hills,
miles of green
and feeling safe
yet am fading ill.

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Me, you & my world
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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, this is so sad, I can feel a lot of emotion of sickness and talking of leaving. Hope you are well. Take care, Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Were you feeling homesick? Such a good little poem Kahdai. ;)Pia

Submitted by shoe on
I agree, I enjoyed this little poem, seems to say a lot with few words.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Aaw :) well thankyou all! Dont worry am alright It's just I hate being in the city I dont feel safe and I have only just got out to the countryside for a weekend and it made me more homesick Another illness noone can see K xxx

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