'Meant to be'
By andrew-evans
Mon, 18 Apr 2011
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A heartbeat,
pounding in my chest
and a second mirroring the first,
the rise and fall of a breath
filling my lungs with air,
shared in the same instant by you,
a locking of lips
speaking the words of the soul
and the fixation of eyes
showing the truths of it too,
a sensation of pure ecstacy
rushing through my veins
every moment I'm with you.
A feeling of belonging
when you hold me in your arms,
a feeling of 'meant to be'
when I hold you in mine.
Life has a purpose
and we were all
created for a reason,
and god put me here
to stay with you
for all of time.
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Hi andrew-evans, what a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi andrew-evans,
what a beautiful, romantic poem, full of love.
A very nice read.
Jenny.
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very romantic - I agree with
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
very romantic - I agree with Jenny.
You have some typos - most importantly it's meant, not ment, so you need to fix to title too. then ecstasy - and veins
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Lovely proof that romance is
Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on
Lovely proof that romance is not dead! Enjoyed reading it very much.
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