Something in the Air

By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 02 May 2011
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A kind of longing
in the air today.
The pouting mouths
of mounding clouds
vie to hold the sun,
then spit it out again,
traversing a sky
with designs
on being an ocean
with dreams, maybe,
of plunging waves,
white water creaming
in the wake of a schooner;
of coral reefs,
of wind-blown
desert islands....
of fathoms deep
blue pastures
where seals swim
and petrels skim the surf,
and of turning
a zillion pebbles
into sand.
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Sandlady. Delightful. I was
Sandlady.
Delightful.
I was sitting on my little hill early this morning.
This takes me straight back, amazing.
ScoZen
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"The pouting mouths of
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"The pouting mouths
of mounding clouds
vie to hold the sun,
then spit it out again,
traversing a sky
with designs
on being an ocean"
- these lines have to be some of THE most beautiful poetry I have ever read. Well done, Tina. This is GORGEOUS!
Magic xxx
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Hi Tina, you really took me
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Hi Tina,
you really took me somewhere else in this poem, yes
much better than doing housework. Love the idea of
coral reefs and wind blown desert islands.
Simply beautiful.
Jenny.
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it's beautiful Tina -
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
it's beautiful Tina - wonderful imagery! i think cleaning is very overrated - this is much better.
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Yes beautiful imagery- you
Yes beautiful imagery- you really painted a lovely picture here Tina. Imagine you could see the ocean by looking at the clouds! fabulous.
;)Pia
by the way Thunderclap Newman played the song "something in the air"- no reference well? But yes you did see something in the air- Oh I get it- I am silly- a saying of course.
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You know Tina precisely that
You know Tina precisely that EP was the first I ever bought and paid for from my own purse. Funny isn't it? I almost wore it out.
;)Pia
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I've always been a bit of a
I've always been a bit of a revolutionary Tina- hehe
;)Pia
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How could I not like this
How could I not like this Tina - apart from being very visual and beautiful, I have a mention!
Coral
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Well done Silver spun Sand,
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Well done Silver spun Sand, a well thought out and written poem :)
keep writing
Keep Smiling :))))
ps that's at least 3 of us have sea on our minds lately, it must be the summer sun making us think of the calm and beautiful ocean :)))
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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Beautiful imagery. Twenty
Beautiful imagery. Twenty years ago the New Yorker magazine and Atlantic Monthly used to print lovely, ephemeral poems like this. Then the academics and scholarly, cerebral types took over. This is a yet another gem!
barryj1
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Very wonderful. I was
Very wonderful. I was watching the wind in next-door's small birch tree around that time and getting similarly transported. Those sort of moments are rather humbling and you just feel lucky when they happen to come along. Thanks for sharing yours.
Rob
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love the sounds in this
love the sounds in this poem. love the images. flawless flow. all of the stanzas are incredibly great, but the first one especially stands out to me. congrats on the cherry for another fine piece of work!
cheers,
-Jose.
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