Let's start again

Cherry

By Louise178

Wed, 18 May 2011
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1. My big eyes send you love
4. Down on the floor cruising
3. Can't you understand me?
2. It's a long way up
5. Hey don't push it's my turn
6. Letters, numbers yeah I can do this
7. I wanna be in your gang :)
8. Study...na outside on me bike thank you
9. Exams came they went
10. Night clubs parties....work
11. Yes I suppose I will
12. Then along came you

Now it's your turn, skip up to number one
and let's start again...

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Good stuff, Louise, and I wish you 'bonne chance' with the competition;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you Tina :)

Louise

Submitted by The Big Bad G on
Quirky, I like it. I was thinking about an acrostic, but you may have it here. Can I ask why it's not in order though, am I missing something?

Submitted by Louise178 on
Yes you are missing something.....it's obvious when you know :)

Louise

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Louise178 Yes, liked this too. Good luck with the comp Short and sweet. julie

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thanks Julie, Good Luck to everyone else aswell, it's quite fun entering a competition isn't it :)

Louise

Submitted by Highhat on
I like this- it is quite unique- but a bit of a riddle for me- that's only my fault !!haha ;)Pia

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
A good interpretation of the given title. If I'm not mistaken it describes the progression of a young girl growing up.

 

Submitted by Louise178 on
I am sort of wondering if the cherry picking robot has clicked on the wrong thing? Seems a bit strange but anyway who cares it's most welcome :)

Louise