We cried today...
By threeleafshamrock
Sun, 15 May 2011
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Pain falls from her eyes,
she is defeated.
I did not notice;
separate rooms,
private pillows...
Now with heaven calling
I am in hell;
the dream sought,
a nightmare!
The longing cannot
outweigh the guilt.
Satisfaction will not
overcome conscience;
I am defeated.
Pain falls from my eyes...
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i like the first two stanza,
i like the first two stanza, feel a little lost with the third, and perhaps because of that, i think the next two might belong to another poem.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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This is heavy going I've
This is heavy going I've seen it. Bottles break homes. “Now with heaven calling I am in hell”. Absolutely terrifying. Your poem is brilliant.
All the best. Nolan &
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