Shroud.

By ScoZen

Fri, 19 Aug 2011

5090 reads

30 comments

I never washed the sheet
you laid upon that night
bloodied like the Turin shroud
on dark days I wrap it
around me and weep

Certificate U

Poem

Poetry with L plates on.

Love

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I was actually thinking

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Fri, 2011-08-19 15:59

I was actually thinking about the Turin shroud the other day, so in a way I've copyrighted it, but since I really like this I'll give you a shot, but no sharing.

I believe the shroud you

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:03

I believe the shroud you were thinking about is Todger's dog blanket? ps thanks for kind comment and, just to say I'm still catching up on your (263 tales) Reading Boycey at present. Regards to all in UFO's.

ScoZen

How sad Scozen- short but

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Fri, 2011-08-19 16:00

How sad Scozen- short but well written ;)Pia

Hej. A thanks to you

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:07

Hej. A thanks to you HH Passe pa

ScoZen

So small in words. So large

Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on Fri, 2011-08-19 18:47

So small in words. So large in scope. Great piece. Rich

Thank you kindly

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:12

Thank you kindly Rich. ps I'm currently reading your Moon Tales and others regards

ScoZen

I really like this powerful

Permalink Submitted by shoe on Fri, 2011-08-19 19:06

I really like this powerful short, far exceeds it's 5 lines.

Thank you shoe for your

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:19

Thank you shoe for your support. take care

ScoZen

I agree with everything that

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Fri, 2011-08-19 19:16

I agree with everything that has been said, ScoZen. Small sure is beautiful. Sand Lady;-)

Thanks Sand Lady for your

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:21

Thanks Sand Lady for your valued support. Quite reassuring to say the least. Kind regards

ScoZen

I really like this style, to

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Fri, 2011-08-19 20:09

I really like this style, to the moment and exploding out. Great! atb Lena xx

Thank you Lena. ps. Just to

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 15:26

Thank you Lena. ps. Just to add I have moved out of your Walled Garden and now I'm lost in a glade. "Per Ardu" Beautiful, I intend to stay awhile and linger with the "Ingenues"

ScoZen

I'm a sucker for short poems

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Fri, 2011-08-19 22:50

I'm a sucker for short poems (having a short concentration span) and this was a gem.

Hey seashore. Thank

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 21:20

Hey seashore. Thank you. ps I just paid another visit to your "Saints and Sinners in Margate".

ScoZen

A very lot said in those few

Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on Sat, 2011-08-20 07:13

A very lot said in those few words. Amazing.

Thanks LGM re your "The many

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-23 16:04

Thanks LGM re your "The many faces of men" I can't see any of me in there?

ScoZen

newScoZen Hi! yes, seems

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Tue, 2011-08-23 16:30

newScoZen Hi! yes, seems sad, beautuflly put to-gether, in a few lines. Thankyou. I have the book "The Turin Shroud". How is the weather now? julie

A late reply Julie. Thanks

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-30 23:14

A late reply Julie. Thanks for reading. ps Have you found the "Of Love and Hope" book yet?

ScoZen

A greateful thanks to the

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Fri, 2011-08-26 12:36

A greateful thanks to the Eds for my cherry. Much appreciated.

ScoZen

Re: My many faces of

Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on Fri, 2011-08-26 12:47

Re: My many faces of men..... guess I better invent a new category for you then?

Hello LGM. I could well be

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-30 22:59

Hello LGM. I could well be one from your "From the Womb". Now there's a thought?

ScoZen

Hello LGM. I could well be

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Tue, 2011-08-30 23:00

Hello LGM. I could well be one from your "From the Womb". Now there's a thought?

ScoZen

Well, ScoZen, you're bound

Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on Wed, 2011-08-31 10:42

Well, ScoZen, you're bound to be if you were born of woman, and I don't think you hatched!

"...and I don't think you

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Wed, 2011-08-31 18:14

"...and I don't think you hatched..." Aww...cluck...cluck...aww...cluck...

ScoZen

Please don't take offense. I

Permalink Submitted by MaggieG on Thu, 2011-09-08 18:30

Please don't take offense. I have read this several times, and I still have a picture of a serial killer in my head. This was very disturbing which trust me did not diminish it in the least

Hello MG. "...I still have

Permalink Submitted by ScoZen on Thu, 2011-09-08 20:25

Hello MG. "...I still have a picture of a serial killer in my head..." Just to reassure you that this was not the confession of a serial killer,plus no offence taken. Apologies if you found it disturbing. ps thanks for reading

ScoZen

This, for example, doesn't

Permalink Submitted by Florian on Tue, 2011-11-15 14:25

This, for example, doesn't need an explanation or a context, complete in itself and very good indeed.

Shroud.

By ScoZen

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I was actually thinking

I believe the shroud you

How sad Scozen- short but

Hej. A thanks to you

So small in words. So large

Thank you kindly

I really like this powerful

Thank you shoe for your

I agree with everything that

Thanks Sand Lady for your

I really like this style, to

Thank you Lena. ps. Just to

I'm a sucker for short poems

Hey seashore. Thank

A very lot said in those few

Thanks LGM re your "The many

newScoZen Hi! yes, seems

A late reply Julie. Thanks

A greateful thanks to the

Re: My many faces of

Hello LGM. I could well be

Hello LGM. I could well be

Well, ScoZen, you're bound

"...and I don't think you

Please don't take offense. I

Hello MG. "...I still have

No apologies necessary.

Oh my...this really packs a

A kind thanks for reading

This, for example, doesn't

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