In a Green Grave
By hilary west
Mon, 07 Nov 2011
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They were introduced in a green grave
Amongst the colours of red tulips,
Yellow narcissi, the blue of scilla.
"Are you comfortable?" he said.
She was too young to die.
"I am the unhappy dead," she said.
Her life cut short by illness, disease.
"I am fat on life, fit as a butcher's dog
Till the day I died."
"I cried all night," she said.
"I died laughing in the whore-house," he said,
A widower of merry japes.
"So this is our lot.
You are too early and I am too late for you
In our green grave."
The leaves of tall trees fell down like confetti
In the marriage of the times.
Two souls not in harmony
For a prolongation of death's eternity.
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This has such a surreal feel
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This has such a surreal feel about it, Hilary.
I liked it very very much, but such a sad story you paint, so skilfully, with your words:-
"Amongst the colours of red tulips,
Yellow narcissi, the blue of scilla."
Tina
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Victorian...yes, most
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Victorian...yes, most certainly;-)SSS
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N.J.RICHARDSON.Love this
Permalink Submitted by nickynoo02 on
N.J.RICHARDSON.Love this poem.
N.J.RICHARDSON
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Hello Hilary, This was so
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello Hilary,
This was so poignant, yet beautiful at the same time.
Every word I felt, was so thought out.
Jenny.
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