Upside down

By shades

Tue, 12 Jul 2011

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3 comments

In an upside down town,
Mrs upside down Brown,
Heads to the upside down market
Drives her upside down car,
Not that upside down far,
To an upside down space where she’ll park it.

She looks down at the sky,
Through an upside down eye,
As she pushes her upside down trolley,
The skies dark and grey,
A wet upside down day,
And she’s forgotten her upside down brolly.

©RS2011

Comments

this would be perfect to

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Tue, 2011-07-12 21:09

this would be perfect to illustrate

Thanks Insert, I'm

Permalink Submitted by shades on Tue, 2011-07-12 21:16

Thanks Insert, I'm practicing with pen and pad to get a few line drawings done. I don't know if illustrating is something that can be learnt but I'll give it a go. Thanks for the comments.

As happens so often I've

Permalink Submitted by Geoffrey on Sat, 2011-11-12 09:13

As happens so often I've only just found your 'shorts' If you can draw please do, I wish I could but I was an engineer not an artist! Your stories and poems deserve far more than just posting here! Your children when they arrive will be very lucky! I only hope they appreciate it. Unfortunately mine didn't like Jennifer Jane! "Waily waily"