Poppies for my daughter
By seashore
Sun, 13 Nov 2011
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Last November I painted poppies
just for you -
and though I mixed the colours,
and held the brush,
the imagery was far more yours
than mine - starkly beautiful,
like your war poems, conceived
you tell me, in another place,
another time.
I watched as blood-stains soaked
the page; his blood, that of our ancestor,
yours and mine, the one whose spirit
moved the earth beneath
your feet that day in Flanders,
when you stumbled into a shell-hole....
I did not paint those poppies;
I think they were his gift to you
a reminder for both of us
lest we forget.
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What a moving poem coral and
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a moving poem coral and you painted such a
beautiful picture. Lovely words.
Jenny.
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Well done kid! A picture is
Well done kid! A picture is worth more than a thousand words so they say.
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I can't do links and
I can't do links and attachments seashore but I will check this one out. The poem is stand alone good and the stumble into the shell hole line is wonderful. Well done. :-)
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Fabulous, Coral and the
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Fabulous, Coral and the picture of those wonderful poppies completes it beautifully;-)
Tina ;-)
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loved the painting- water
loved the painting- water colour- so vivid- and the poem was a cherry worth or rather the poppy worth- beautiful- your daughter must be proud of you!
;)Pia
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New Seashore Yes Coral,so
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Seashore
Yes Coral,so much
is written into this
lovely poem. Of the poppies.
This re-minds me of the picture,
by 'Monet' and child and mum running through
the poppy fields. Paper mentioned they are
bringing it back. Quite often markets can pick
on up £5. I got one once.
And now you have the cherries!
well done. Good see your writing.
julie x
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I remember the first one,
I remember the first one, but I can't tell what you've changed, still just stunning.
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A very well constructed and
A very well constructed and moving poem, beautifully enhanced by the painting. Good work seashore!
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Truly moving and beautifully
Truly moving and beautifully written, seashore, and perfectly topical, even though I’m late commenting. I feel your pain. Brilliant.
sue
TVR
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Now I realise how annoying
Now I realise how annoying it is to have to scroll through so many comments to get to post one.
Excellent poetry; thoroughly deserving.
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Beautiful work of art, and
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Beautiful work of art, and well done on managing the attachment! A beautiful poem too. Lucky daughter to have such a talented Mum.
Overthetop1
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If your daughter is as
If your daughter is as talented as you then its a very lucky family.
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Wonderfully written! You are
Permalink Submitted by cynthiae77 on
Wonderfully written! You are indeed very talented. A well deserved cherry!
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