Wreckage
By fromagreenhill
Sat, 17 Dec 2011
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He kept returning
to the wreckage,
not because he liked it
but because it was
so strangely peaceful there.
The worst had happened
and life had gone on,
the breeze still nagged
at the tatters hanging
from the charred wood,
the grass was growing
where the metal and
plastic had melted,
and each morning
the sun rose on the dead,
who couldn’t leave
until the living had heard
their stories.
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Oh wow! Right there with
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Oh wow! Right there with you. Beautifully depicted. Thanks for giving my Saturday a hook.
Parson Thru
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I agree wholeheartedly with
I agree wholeheartedly with both Parson Thru and seashore. A reward to start my day and I haven't even done anything to deserve it!
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I really enjoyed this - very
I really enjoyed this - very well written indeed, reminds me of a wreck I saw on the beach in Santa Barbara
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