Yesterday's Sky

Cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Thu, 19 Jan 2012
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18 comments
 

Blue Moon – he chose;
roses from my love,
but, in a day or so,
in their art deco vase,
framed by a window,
they withered –
sun-dried...

And yet, like a dove
I found, fell prey
to the Kite, I buried
by a beaming Buddha
in my back-yard...

and the leaf...
the last one to fall
from my Tulip Tree,
given, but for a moment
the gift of knowing
what it is to fly...to write
its poem on the clouds...

an epitaph for all
who ask no more
than to exist
for this, here, now...
the rose, the dove
and the leaf,
they will live on,
in yesterday’s sky.

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Comments

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Hello! Tina, Beautiful poem. Blue moon,roses,and art deco vase. You mention a dove,strange dove of peace1 In the paper yesterday an artist his drawing or sketch of a dove,is now going to be used on side, of aeroplane's. Missed you' Wheatsheaf' and your great writing as an author to read. Fab; evening! Wonderful book of 'Blightersrock' wonderful pictures and story all fitting to the photos! arived by post! But overwhelmingly signed by him, and like you said once, I am inspiration. put on here now. Editor's speech on all, and those couldn't come. Next one is a Tuesday 15th May 2012. And Editor gave such a good one on someone 'shandy' gone to my head,it was of me, couldn't believe OMG! before reading. So many good readers. Ray went missing, got home told me went out,burgher, but Editor (Tony) assured me be back! He was,scary, not in room or downstairs,saw 'Tony'. Still think you are a terrific writer and in prose, I can't do! Love always "Fireworks In The Snow" of your's,so bravely written! which once you let me kindly read! Resting to-day! all the best very foggy! yesterday! i MADE N/HOME ID-DAY LEFT AT 4PM OR BEOFRE,SHARP,rAY SAID GO TO BOTH! back home by 4pm sorry! early onto train Ray,5.515pm Lonond 7pm. Home mid-night! Home happy! great evening! Take care! julie cavalcaderl and Ray xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Glad you enjoyed this one, Julie...and I hope your head has stopped going round from that shandy;-) Yes, isn't Blighter's Rock's book fantastic. I got my copy last week. Brilliant story and pictures, as you say. All the best to you, Julie and Ray, of course. Tina xx

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I think this one is my favourite- well one of my favourites of yours Tina- but I love the mystical and magical feeling of this one- it's so profound and puzzling..the last stanza really stands out for me.. an excellent poem. ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thank you, so very much, Pia. You always see right into the heart of a poem. You have that 'special knack'. Quite some gift;-) Tina;-)

 

Submitted by TVR on
Much enjoyed, nice one, Tina. Congratulations on cherries. sue

TVR

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thank you, sue...very much;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Tina,great! writer and peice of work full of images Well deserved cherries! Liked it all. Stanza 3rd words The gift of knowing what it is to fly.. to write its poem on the clouds.. Sorry,mistakes made before! last comments. julie x

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello Tina, Lovely poem! 'To write its poem on the clouds' Seems to me to be what you have done here. Much enjoyed. Moya
 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thank you, Moya...and I guess I have;-) Tina

 

Submitted by adora on
Hi Tina... You never cease to amaze me with the way in which you manage to somehow take ordinary words and string them together to create beauty and magic, time after time after time. One of my favourites of yours as well.
adora-

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
And you too, adora, have taken ordinary words and 'strung them together' beautifully. Thank you, so very much. Tina;-)

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Wonderful; as usual. Leaves a lovely post-read tingle. Well done Tina ;) Chris xxx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Kind of you to say so, Chris. Many thanks;-) Tina xxx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Beautiful read Tina and the title said it all for me. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Barb7 on
Really enjoyed this poem. Lovely way with words. As a newcomer,thanks for your encouragement.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks, Jenny...very much;-) Tina

 

Submitted by russiandoll on
Very Lovely :) well done

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Well thank you kindly, russiandoll. Pleased you thought so. Tina;-)