For sue

By swindonwoody

Wed, 01 Feb 2012
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3 comments
 

Walk with me in valley of gold
Of sliver stream
See birds in fight
In my dreams

A lone tonight
I hug a pillow hard
Crying in the dark
No words can I say
Lost my world
What more can I say

This room feel
Unreal
You’re everywhere around
What why who
What the hell is
Time all about
To give with one
Second
And take with
Others
right now
I feel like
I don’t know
Right now

Tears fall down my face
But there too many
Spaces
Around
Oh
if I could
only
Hear your sound
Hear you breathe
Feel you near me
Want to scream
But nothing
Comes out
I am falling a part

Walk with me in valley of gold
Of sliver stream
See birds in fight
In my dreams

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Comments

Submitted by Denzella on
Hello swindonwoody, Your poem vividly expresses your sense of loss. Enjoyed the poem though very sad. Thanks for sharing.
 

Submitted by swindonwoody on
thank you very much i wrote this for a lady i dont know very well who lost her hubby yesterday. when the times is right i will give her a copy. thank you for your kinds words. maggie

maggie

Submitted by shoe on
I think you have shown great percipience and understanding of loss, a very moving poem.