Archeologist
By lenchenelf
Fri, 18 Nov 2011
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He finds a whorl of life
in carbonised patterns.
Words without voice,
ebony fingerprints,
artefacts, of being.
Misspent drifts of choice,
hidden, saved, carelessly lost.
Stored decadence revisited,
through split lense goggles:
Utopia,
Neglect,
Decay.
Communal middens hold secrets,
careless discards reveal
what we were, what we are;
what we will be
and he weeps.
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Edit 20.11.11
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love the immediacy of your
love the immediacy of your writing Lena and whorl is my favourite word today. :-)
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That first stanza is just
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
That first stanza is just inspired. A great subject matter too. Well done on the cherry, Lena!
Magic xxx
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As always, your cherries are
Permalink Submitted by Frances Macaula... on
As always, your cherries are very well deserved.
I like the whole approach of this subject, well done again.
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