Moon Art
By Savx
Sat, 10 Mar 2012
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7 comments
Laying Here,
I notice you peeking at me
Through the clouds,
So white and round;
So full and without sound.
I Love The Way
Your light shines
As it may,
Through trees' sways;
It makes my day.
I Am Glad
When you shine your
Light into my heart,
Just like a [love] dart;
It makes me think art.
But When I
Say my good nights,
And pray my prayers,
I think of you peeking at me
Through the clouds,
So white and round;
So full and without sound.
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Comments
What a beautiful poem. You
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a beautiful poem. You have given the moon such
an artistic presence. I really love your description.
Thankyou for sharing.
Jenny.
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There is something highly
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
There is something highly orignal and delightful about this poem;-) Very much enjoyed.
Tina
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Hi Savannah, I hope your
Permalink Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Savannah, I hope your well :)
Wow well written as usual, really enjoyed this poem and like Jenny said it's a beautiful poem which is easily felt.
keep writing
keep smiling
Trish :)
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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A very nice poem for a
A very nice poem for a Friday evening of promising clouds dotted in blue skies and warm embraces
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