Shells

By Anvar2

Sun, 11 Mar 2012

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6 comments

We dance upon a plane of ice
A skin across a vat of blood.
How brittle is this skin of self,
How thin the ice we tread;
A crack - and all that was white
Is red.

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hi Anvar2 nice peice of

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Sun, 2012-03-11 18:42

hi Anvar2 nice peice of work. thank you

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

Thanks Maisie!

Permalink Submitted by Anvar2 on Sun, 2012-03-11 19:49

Thanks Maisie!

A carefully thought out

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Tue, 2012-03-13 08:12

A carefully thought out poem, Anvar...skilfully written. Less is often more, as here;-) Tina

Thanks Tina, appreciate the

Permalink Submitted by Anvar2 on Tue, 2012-03-13 12:41

Thanks Tina, appreciate the comment.

A clever poem in style and

Permalink Submitted by Denzella on Sat, 2012-03-24 19:27

A clever poem in style and content. Moya

Hi Mels, Thanks for your

Permalink Submitted by Anvar2 on Tue, 2012-04-03 18:39

Hi Mels, Thanks for your comment and glad you enjoyed it!

Shells

By Anvar2

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hi Anvar2 nice peice of

Thanks Maisie!

A carefully thought out

Thanks Tina, appreciate the

A clever poem in style and

Hi Mels, Thanks for your

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