You make me

Cherry

By mycall

Tue, 26 Jun 2012
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12 comments
 

You make me
Want to learn more
You are the book
I would never have read
You are the music
I have never heard before
You make me

You make me
Want to get on a roller-coaster
I was terrified before
But you are the risk
That I want to take
You make me
Less aware of danger
You are the stranger
I am most comfortable with
You make me

You are the song
I am bound to sing
The live audience
I stand before
The stage beneath my feet
I’m famous
But I was shaking
Like a leaf before
I was nervous
But you make me

©2011

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Comments

Submitted by Rigel on
I like this. Rigel

Submitted by scratch on
So do I.

 

Submitted by mycall on
Thanks very much to you both, Mike

Mike

Submitted by Jessiibear on
Man, this is so beautiful. About a special someone, I sense? ;P

Jess

Submitted by mycall on
Thanks Jessica, well no one in particular but I can dream, ;)Mike

Mike

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
You are the stranger I am most comfortable with This is a really lovely touch well written.

Mark Heathcote

Submitted by mycall on
Thank you Mark, Mike

Mike

Submitted by seashore on
So simply written but quite beautiful.

Submitted by seashore on
So simply written but quite beautiful.

Submitted by mycall on
Thanks very much Seashore,Mike

Mike

Submitted by Sooz006 on
This is my favourite one of yours so far, Mike. Someone worthy enough to want to improve and push yourself for. Beautiful.

 

Submitted by mycall on
Thanks Sooz, really appreciate it Mike

Mike