Zac
By Rigel
Wed, 27 Jun 2012
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I never ever saw you – never looked
with wonder on your face; felt
your fingers tightly curl around mine,
nor rocked you to sleep with prayers
that God would keep you safe...
no matter what, no matter when.
I like to think, though, that I met you
in that peerless moment, on the road
leads from this world to the next;
your joyous ‘hello’ – my sad farewell;
your tears, soft on my cheek, but know
this... that once, I breathed your name.
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I thought this was really
I thought this was really lovely, Rigel... two really cracking stanzas, lovely sentiments throughout which were eloquently expressed. Much enjoyed.
Trev (sue)
TVR
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Mysterious and beautifully
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Mysterious and beautifully written Rigel. Bitter-sweet and very sensual. Liked.
Parson Thru
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This is so very poignant,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is so very poignant, Rigel. Beautifully done.
Tina
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I can relate to this one,
I can relate to this one, Rigel and echo Tina's words - beautifully done.
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I was truely moved by this
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I was truely moved by this poem Rigel.
Jenny.
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Rigel, you just get better
Rigel, you just get better and better. I am no poet but I like your style immensely because your poems are accessible, even to the likes of me, yet they carry a powerful idea.
Another one I really enjoyed,
Moya
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