Yawn

By grandaddy

Thu, 19 Jul 2012
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Well what shall I write about in this poem of mine
I should go through the paper, but haven’t the time
Perhaps I should look up and observe out the window
Or browse through an article on my new kindle.
To be honest I won’t because I’m just wasting time
Half an hour left in this office of mine
Well that took two minutes, so now what now should I do
I’ll go to the toilet and squeeze out a pooh

Ah that’s better but still got ten minutes before I can go
Not interested in work now, that's all that I know
Ah Jesus time tick, tick on until five
So I can leave place and feel more alive
Just noticed the phones voicemail button flashing at me
Means I’ve got a message I better just see
Another member of the public having a moan
Oh well, it’s five now at last I can go home

Certificate U
Poem
Humour

Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Loved the rhyme and flow of this, more please!

 

Submitted by grandaddy on
I'll try my best Oliver, but its gruelling work. what, as my Dad would say when making a poor joke, thanks for the comment, I'll ckeck your stuff out, but I know it gets cherrypicked alot. Love those cherries.

 

Submitted by jolono on
Thanks grandaddy, I'm serious, it looks like you were very prolific here some years ago but not now! Keep going, write more, comment more and it'll be much better. Yes, I'm pleased to say that I do get a few cherries and guess what, it's hard work, I read lot's of peoples work on here and comment on just about everything, both good and bad, so I take the time to try to be constructive. I would never say I wouldn't read other peoples work cos they get loads of cherries, i'd be the first to say, "well done on the cherries". Keep going, be positive.

 

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
A good write very amusing thanks for sharing… :)

Mark Heathcote