Time Travel

By grandaddy

Wed, 15 Aug 2012
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Haven’t written for quite while
Was thinking about changing style
Yes I know, it’s about time too
At least think, my work through
OK, OK I should give things more thought
But blasting it out was what I was taught
It really however should make some sense
Or in past, not use future tense
That being that, I shall in time to come
Work on the past, and on what I’ve done

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
written for quite while... a while? OK, OK I should give things more thought... Ok, ok .. or okay, okay? Or in past, not use future tense... favourite line (though I'd be tempted to reverse it) Oh the past always catches up with you eventually. Nice one Granddad... lovely.