O Melancholy

I like this - needs a bit of editing with format over from word but the opening is very strong. :-)

Oh. I've had a play about with it and really not used anything but your words which I really like. I have kept the capitals at the beginning of lines because you like them. This is just my take on format using your words and it's just one of many ways of doing it and of course it's just my opinion etc etc. Welcome to ABC by the way. To hides ones face, (To hide one's face) In vain attempt disguise The sorrow shining From thy face and eyes. What sorrow’s this, That tears a heart apart And wrenches cries unknown From deep your soul(?) How can one feel this burning, Ripping fire and yet stay whole And walk upon the earth(?) Is purpose here, where footsteps once did fall(?) (Nothing is here, it seems it hides elsewhere) (and) more than nothing loss. Heart wrenching, wrenching cries. Crying tears. Hide your face away(,) Nothing is all there is now. O melancholy.