The Snowman
By ItsSteveDave
Fri, 24 Aug 2012
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My lines are just diaries;
They hold no objects aloft
And say, ‘take heed of this,
It is beauty!’
Nor do they stand atop
A great height, looking down
On civilisation,
Though I see how small we are.
They are written from eye level,
While squinting, cock-eyed,
At things which obstruct me,
As I try too hard to be wry.
Why did someone not tell me when
I was a child, scribbling snowman stories
That I and the snowman could fly?
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Liked this. Especially those
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Liked this. Especially those last three lines.
Rich
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I like it too, Steve. Very
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like it too, Steve. Very much;-)
Tina
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Hello Steve, nice poem. I
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Hello Steve, nice poem. I suggest you write a poem based on your last two lines. Go for it. And post it on this site. Cheers. Richard
Richard L. Provencher
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