Hailstones (Nursery Rhyme)

By well-wisher

Sat, 17 Nov 2012

3 comments

Hailstones,
rattling
and
clattering
down.

Hailstones,
scattering
all
over
the
town.

What
a
racket
they
make.
Oh
my!

Those
little
diamonds
from
the
sky.

Permalink Submitted by braintrain on Sat, 2012-11-17 18:51

Great poem I think a few more verses would be nice but its great!

Permalink Submitted by steve_elliott04 on Sat, 2012-11-17 19:30

This is so quaint and endearing. Your use of form is very effective. It is a poem perfect for children, and I loved it! Steve

Permalink Submitted by barboy on Sun, 2012-11-18 01:30

Cute! A tasty poetry snack, I might suggest you don't post the whole poem in the teaser section though :)