Ang zi e tti

By denni1

Sun, 01 Jul 2012
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Runnin to the bus stop
Is when l have a think.
Did l pack my sandwiches
My keys
Something to drink.
It's that time of year for me
to work both day n night.
It's Xmas
shop is heavin
and the panto lights are bright.
Yes, the money's handy
but you never stop or rest.
Shut up, stop the greetin
do your smilin, happy best ..

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Submitted by petal on
Nice outflow! Just a suggestion... It would be better not to have the spellings altered. Loved the title! :)

 

Submitted by denni1 on
What do you meeeen !! ?? Denise

Submitted by denni1 on
Thank you as always for readin my stuff, but do you not tink they meant the opposite, as in, lose the dialect ?? Dx

Submitted by denni1 on
I meant, 'think' ..

Submitted by denni1 on
Barrie xx

Submitted by sunra59 on
Denise. Hope you weren't already Christmas shopping when you wrote this! sunra59