Infinite Sky
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By mgwalpole
Tue, 18 Dec 2012
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5 comments
A vast and quiet carpet, still
cradling vacant forms
and little stains
and little threads and knots
and
a smell like
toffee
fudge ice cream
and, on the brink
between bedroom and hall,
and stairs and doors
and infinite sky;
a forgotten sock
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I really like this I hopeit
I really like this I hopeit does well in the comp.
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With fatboy & Sunchild on
With fatboy & Sunchild on this little short.
ScoZen
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Also jumping on the
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Also jumping on the bandwagon, this is truly great.
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I logged back in to read
I logged back in to read this one again.
A true delight in it's simplicity.
PS to the others who commented ie Maggy, Sunchild and fatboy.
When are you all going to post your versions of the comp ???
ScoZen
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Beautiful in its simplicity,
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
Beautiful in its simplicity, I agree. Good luck with the competition
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