The Birth

By jolono
Wed, 16 Jan 2013
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10 comments
Cord wrapped tight, he burst
Into the light.
Ripped from a wet red world
Into the light.
Sound, smell, sight, all new
No more dark.
Upside down, now he gasps
No more dark.
A cry, primitive yet familiar
A mother smiles
Cleaned, wiped and held
A mother smiles
Strangers yes, but then he hears
Soothing Sounds
Suckles tight, gentle touch
Soothing sounds
Eyes still shut, love surrounds
Welcome son.
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Having just been visited by
Having just been visited by a little 10 day old baby and soon going to be a Grandma myself I could certainly relate to this Jolono- it was wonderful to read your words-
;)Pia
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A lovely capture of the
A lovely capture of the feelings of those who observe the moment. Rh
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Very natural. Beautiful
Permalink Submitted by The Talisman on
Very natural.
Beautiful read.
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Hey, what's this,
Hey, what's this, Jolono,
Going soft on us now are you?
I'm only kidding it was lovely and its nice you can show your softer side.
Moya
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