Sentient Raindrops

Cherry

By a102866

Fri, 26 Jul 2013
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5 comments
 

If each, careening raindrop a sentience entrains,
then why do phobic, living creatures abstain
All distinct droplets an archetypal life contains,
yet to glimmering coat of mail, each enchains
Pearly drops of dew glisten on road, grass, pane,
in rhythmic patterns, congruence to maintain
Soft pitter patter taps a gentle refrain;
Therapeutic notes lightly coddle the brain
Refreshing pine scent sun burnt scent drains;
Clear solvent; pollens, pollutants strain
Into pools, penetrate: hill, dale, plain;
libation that purges earth's stains

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Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Typo: "then why do phobic, living creatures obstain (abstain/obtain)".

 

Submitted by seashore on
..and another "therapeutic" instead of "therapeutic"? Otherwise I too enjoyed this though I had to reach for the dictionary for a couple of words (no bad thing!).

Submitted by a102866 on
Thanks, seashore for correcting my misspelled words. I have changed both misspelled words. I appreciate the kind comments Cathy500, scratch, and seashore.

Submitted by tcook on
I like this - the very wordy approach works - and it rarely does! Good stuff. one more spelling error, I'm afraid, - pollutant not polutant.

Submitted by a102866 on
Thanks, tcook. I have changed the misspelled word. I appreciate your generous comments.