I didn't know
By hoalarg1
Wed, 28 Aug 2013
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I didn't know I loved the rain
until it fled and failed to fall
I didn’t know I’d found my home
until I packed and moved away
I didn’t know I couldn’t feel
until I noticed there was pain
I didn’t know I was in love
until she quickly upped and left
I didn’t know that I was sad
until a smile broke free with joy
I didn’t know I walked alone
until I found a loyal friend
I didn’t know I was lost
until I stumbled upon a sign
I didn’t know it was dark
until a switch bathed me in light
I didn’t know I could go on
until I got up and gave some more.
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good poem. i like the way the
Permalink Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on
good poem. i like the way the mood lifts as the tale progresses. Elsie
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Enjoyed this. Especially that
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Enjoyed this. Especially that last line.
Rich
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