Parisian Commute
By Lem
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The first train arrives with a sibilant shussh.
Swarm. Your reflection
And those of your platform opponents
Flicker as though caught inside a zoetrope.
Strange and distorted, funhouse mirrors.
Men’s trenchcoats transform them into sharply creased birds
Crammed into a commuter cage.
Screwed-in headphones gravely auscultating
Throbbing discothèque pulses, signs of life.
Faintly tangible warmth of seated strangers.
Dusty windows frame the outside world-
Blurred, gritty landscape paintings.
My heavy eyes catch and contain peculiar station names.
What origins has Ranelagh
What sad tales La Muette?
In the half-waking almost silence of morning
The air hangs soft and heavy
With thick swathes of commuter dreams.
Stairs up, stairs down, an innate panic,
Rough scuff tumble, rat race. Stop-
Train two: tourists. It is raucous
Borders fall, barriers shattered.
Packed, sealed, airtight.
Newspaper print-smudged hands scrabble
By the hundreds; unlikely pole-dancers.
People propped upright on people,
Sweat of the métro-boulot-dodo
Masked with pretentious cologne.
A woman croons ‘Besame Mucho’ into a microphone.
We have almost forgotten our purpose here
Lost the threads of the map on the wall.
All at once, a burst dam, the pressure released
We all flow out like minnows in a stream
Into our different worlds.
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Such flawless imagery!
Such flawless imagery!
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I agree with Trilby -
I agree with Trilby - beautiful!
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Hi Lem, this is amazing
Hi Lem, this is amazing writing at its best. I loved the way you describe everything with such a passion. Congrats on the well deserved cherries. Jenny.
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