emanating shuffle

By JupiterMoon

Mon, 21 Oct 2013
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emanating shuffle

 

something is happening,

between us.

 

soft, delicate electricity,

crackling between us

as a silver promise.

 

it feels safe and special;

sacred.

 

a gift of a deep,

authentic connection.

i do not understand it yet,

but i feel the hope within it.

 

we are emanating something shared.

and i don’t think

we even fully know it yet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Loved the idea of the realisation of a connection within this poem,  it reminded me of soul mates realising they are at one with each other.  Enjoyed reading.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by JupiterMoon on

Thank you Jenny - that's exactly how the experience feels. Appreciate the comment very much. 

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Soulmates are wonderful, aren't they? I know. I have one. Wonderful poem, JupiterMoon.

Rich

 

Submitted by Bee on

Very simply stated and straightforward. 

Enjoyed.

Bee

Submitted by maisie on

simplicity and minimization.  nice... 

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!