Pivot-point of History
By Rhiannonw
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Welsh nativity hymns are often concentrated in doctrine and consonant patterns (cynghanedd) and internal rhyme to give an easily memorised form for singing in informal gatherings and ‘plygain’ meetings. I can’t attempt to replicate some of the delights I have read, and possibly English could not form itself into these musical sounds, while still conveying rich content. But I hope this conveys something of the type of thing.
Time’s pivot-point, long prophesied:
just Judge presents a Saviour.
Light radiates to darkened earth –
through virgin birth, heaven’s favour:
a reconciling, holy God
would bring his rod of judgement
on Christ commissioned, willing Son –
the only One sufficient.
The innocent suffered, the Lamb was afflicted,
our punishment meted upon the belovèd.
The mercy procured now offered.
The star of his coming: a King would be reigning;
soon darkness revealing* his depths of enduring –
to wake us, and make us endearing!
*referring to the 3 hours of darkness as Jesus died (Luke 23:44)
For anyone interested here are a few lines from an original Welsh 'Plygain' song: ‘Rhyfeddod na dderfydd yw hon yn dragywydd’ [‘f’ pronounced ‘v’; ‘dd’ pronounced hard ‘th’] – meaning ‘this is an unending wonder eternally]; ‘fod rhaid cael gwaed i gadw’ ['rhaid' and 'gwaed' rhyme] – ‘blood must be found to save’; ‘A Pherson mawr i farw’ [as ‘mawr’ (big) can mutate to ‘fawr’, and ‘farw’ (die) is the mutated form of ‘marw’ this has more impact than at first may seem] – ‘and a big Person to die’
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Hello Rhiannon,
Hello Rhiannon,
This poem illustrates so well your religious conviction. It looks a complex form but it's message is, I think, clear, The punishment for our sins was visited not on us but on God's son, Jesus Christ so that we might be redeemed.
I hope I have understood this correctly and I wish you everything you would wish for yourself in 2014
Moya
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