Go well Caley

By Parson Thru

Thu, 16 Jan 2014
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Go well Caley.
Live well.
I learned a little of your life.
You saw a part of mine.
We knew each other
for a while.
You looked into my eyes.
I wish you all
that I would want.
I pray you meet no harm.
We're all but fragments
of one soul.
Go well Caley.
Live well.

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

I love the simplicity of this poem. Staring and ending the same, it has a circular feel to it with gentle rhymes. Nice message, too.

Bee

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Hi Bee. Thanks. Glad you liked it. Nice moment with a nice person on a nice evening. Bit shabby this morning, mind. Out into the pouring rain with every chance of another nice chat with another perfect stranger. Lovely. x

Parson Thru

Submitted by celticman on

nice sentiments, a prayer of sorts.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Yes. I think you're right celticman. Thanks.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

I agree with celtic, PT.  Nice one, and I hope the shabbiness has disappearedsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Hi Tina.  12 hours of sleep last night, a run this morning and a big box of flowers delivered by Interflora from Malawi.  Not so shabby now.  Steady rain outside but a warm glow inside and a flight to Madrid booked for February.  No, can't really complain.  Hope all is well with you Tina. Thanks.

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