Rubik's cube (I.P.)

By IsntLifeBrilliant

Wed, 26 Mar 2014
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A girl's heart...

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Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Nice and simple but very expressive.Well done. May I offer an alternative third line? 'and even visualise the solution.'

Best,Luigi

 

Submitted by Sooz006 on

Nice little analogy, clever writing. Enjoyed ths muchly. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Were there more lines to this originally? Rhiannon