Two Toucans (Rhyme)

By well-wisher

Wed, 20 Aug 2014

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Two toucans took a cocoanut

and with their beaks they broke a nut

and when they’d broken it in two

they made a cocoanut canoe.

And then, a two man toucan crew,

they took that boat to Timbuktu

where now those toucans, in a tree

live happy as two birds can be.

Permalink Submitted by Hydra on Wed, 2014-08-20 21:09

Great first verse. Not sure about the metre in that last line. Also, it's a strange coconut spelling. But a lovely poem regardless of my nit-picking.

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2014-08-21 15:59

I loved this rhyming poem very much.

Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by Hydra on Thu, 2014-08-21 21:45

That last line fits as snug a bug now.