Refreshing As Early Morning Dew

By skinner_jennifer

Wed, 03 Sep 2014
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Peaceful

and quiet

as the deepest

depths of night,

 

when wild

musing

encompasses

my soul;

 

I plunge

letting go...

meander deep

into curving furrows,

 

piquant kisses

induce my rise and fall,

as we pulp together

like compressed fruit,

 

connections conquering

all frivolous torrents,

as outpouring of flotsam

weaves on the ether of space,

 

no longer

sub-zero,

frozen as verglas

on arctic brink,

 

replaced is correlation,

crossing boundaries into

the unknown...refreshing

as early morning dew.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Beautiful, Jenny...just beautifulsmiley

Full of effective imagery.  Especially like, 'Frozen as verglas on arctic brink'.

Tina

 

Submitted by celticman on

Lovely as dew, as your words often do.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you for reading this poem Tina,  it was inspired by Bee's poem Quiet.

I was just thinking about how being in the arms of the one you love,  and having those passionate moments can release so much stress, that you wake feeling refreshed as morning dew.

I'm so pleased you enjoyed and thank you again for letting me know.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Jack,

what a nice comment...thank you so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts,  much appreciated.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

There's often an otherworldliness in your work. Always makes me think of Cottesmore fairies and natural beauties we miss.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning Vera,

what kind words you've written in your comment.  I seem to spend most of my life in those other worlds where ever I am,  or whatever I'm doing.  The escape of the imagination is something I've always treasured in the hurly burly of life.

I'm so glad this poem hit the spot for you and I'm very grateful for your comment.

Hope you're well and your day's a sunny one.   Look forward to reading more of your work.

All the best.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning magicdarer,  love your name by the way.

You were spot on when you said about great sex...I think when you have great sex with someone you love,  it can be the greatest stress breaker in the world,  taking you to another dimension.  Yes that's what the poem was all about.  By the way those two words you mentioned were basically about the anger that can build up in day to day frustrations,  leaving us cold inside...but then all that disappears by the next morning.

Really pleased you picked up on my train of thought and appreciate you letting me know your thoughts.

Thank you.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

That's okay Magicdarer.  Thanks for coming back.

Jenny.  smiley

 

Submitted by Bee on

Somehow, I missed this beautiful poem, Jenny. So glad I found it in the end.

Bee

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning Bee,

thanks for your lovely comment...you know it was your poem Quiet,  that inspired me to write this,  so I'm also grateful to you.

Appreciate your thoughts and thanks again.

Have a great Thursday.

Jenny.  smiley