Works Night Out
By smokejack
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It’s not called a disco anymore
It’s a club
A works do coerced me
I’m too old to be young at heart
My prejudices are like tattoos
So I pretended not to be me
The music was so loud
I stopped hearing it
The swirling lights
Became a daze
I watched men staring
Whilst the women grazed
The slave auction was yet to begin
The young drink so much more
Drinks look like chemical inventions
Spirits are swallowed in relays
Dancing became gymnastics
Women moving
As if elastic
It felt like I was crashing
Into speeding rainbows
Made of tin
Such was the din
I did not want to see
Daylight before reaching my pillow
Women seem to wear less clothes
Not that I was staring
Sweat and noise
Not much poise
The old days of disco have gone
I left early
There was not much I could learn
From watching young people
Crash and burn
Like I once did
Many years ago
I am too old
To be so bold
At thirty five……
©JMcN 2014
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yeh, that age at the end is
yeh, that age at the end is the real killer-line!
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This form of entertainment
This form of entertainment lasts for a small window, although drinking and dancing at home can be a lifetime pleasure. Really enjoyed the sense of standing apart in this poem.
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Ha ha. Nothing in the world
Ha ha. Nothing in the world could induce me into a nightclub nowadays. Oh for the days of disco and dancing round your handbags. Smashing poem.
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