These I Have Loved

Lovely!

did you mean "skin on skin"

perhaps cut the last line, your title pretty much has it covered.

"going out somewhere just to come home" is excellent

throughout a fine ear, fine musicality.

perhaps cut "in bed", waking probably suffices

a good poem

a lovely collection of disparate things (now have I used that word aright?). I especially liked the 'musicality of language; the kink, the camber, the curve the curl, of a capricious new word.'
and the stars like clover. Rhiannon

Hi Tina,

loved the lines...

the whine of a jet, threading its way

through the slow, cool jazz of a Sunday morning

waking...no particular place to go...

the dawning of my world,

soft, and yawning,  beside me - albeit

hogging my pillow...

Our house is on a flight path, so I could really identify with those lines. Though the use of metaphors captured the tranquillity throughout.

Very much enjoyed.

Jenny.