Deterioration Haiku
By David rollins
Wed, 04 Mar 2015
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DETERIORATION HAIKU
Woke up this morning
and all was right with the world.
She lay there sleeping
Woke up this morning
as she held my noisy phone,
glaring angrily
Woke up this morning
remembering yesterday,
full of arguments
Woke up this morning
looking at the empty space
where she used to be
Woke up this morning
then turned and went back to sleep.
Comforting darkness.
Woke up this morning
determined to do something
then went back to sleep
Woke up this morning
to find my bedroom smashed up,
then reached for the glass.
Woke up this morning.
Had to let the bailiffs in,
Then I got angry.
Woke up this morning
looking at the cell ceiling
and the metal door.
Woke up this morning
blaming everybody else
angry at the world.
Woke up this morning
Vodka and tablets just there
And took a deep breath.
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take a deep breath, powerful.
take a deep breath, powerful.
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1 User voted this as great feedback
anxiety, depression..., ended
Permalink Submitted by tibi popovici on
anxiety, depression..., buried in vodka and tablets. Like!
Good luck for competition!
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