As I Write

I really love the format, great to see new ways of writing poetry! Lovely alternating between the good and bad days...I hope that you get that break filled with dreaming and laughter.

Simple but so, so effective.

Keep the laughter and the hope.

Lindy

good days and bad days. A dichotomy that doesn't always feature because we can't package doubt. Youve did it here. 

Speechless but for; "Why Indeed?"

the sparsity of words gives them a greater power. This is very well done

Hi Bee

I was wondering how you are getting on - and this poem says it all. Good days, bad days, some hope, lots of fear. I'm still keeping on with the praying.

Jean

Bee, my daughter always kept these few lines scrawled on a piece of paper, pinned above her bed.

Give me a draught of laughter before the day begins

Whatever follows after, it's the happy heart that wins.

Your poem reminded me of this. Thank you

Tina

Another goose bump poem Bee, it says so much in so few words. Wishing you good days. Rx

Hello Bee,

The format of this poem adds to its strength.  For me, a true poet says  a lot in a few well chosen words.  You are a true poet.

Moya x

A very good way to describe it. Nasty business.