Out to lunch

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By big stu

Sat, 25 Jul 2015
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Out to lunch was pinned to the door

There was really no need to say more

I stood there aghast

Just stressed and harassed

With no choice but to turn and withdraw.

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Hi, Big Stu, this is the same one that I commented on isn't it? I think you can add 'genres' without reposting, just editing (and you can put more than one 'genre'), which would keep your comments and read counts - though if you want it to come in anew as the new day's posting, under a new genre I guess you would have to repost like you have done. I like a neat limerick form like this.
Rhiannon