Flypast

Cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Mon, 27 Jul 2015
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10 comments
 
A field of August wheat –
ablaze, burnt umber
 
a skein of geese;
light cleaves...
 
breasts – tinged pink – 
a spiralling sunset 
 
quickens the heart
with its wings
Certificate U
Poem
Silver Spun Sand Poems
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Beautiful, and you obviously thought so, too. Enjoyed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Absolutely, Rhiannonsmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

A moment captured in a flash of carefully chosen words.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Yes, indeed, Bee...how right you are...blink and you would have missed it.  

Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

A beautiful picture you paint with words Tina.

Thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

You're more than welcome, Jenny, and thank you for reading.

Tina

 

Submitted by hilary west on

 A  very economic word picture that is quite beautiful. I like the phrase 'breasts - tinged pink'; it is very evocative!

HW

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thanks, HW...appreciatedsmiley

SSS

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Gorgeous splash of colour.

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Glad you thought so, and many thanks for telling me.

Tina