Flypast
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 27 Jul 2015
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A field of August wheat –
ablaze, burnt umber
a skein of geese;
light cleaves...
breasts – tinged pink –
a spiralling sunset
quickens the heart
with its wings
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Beautiful, and you obviously
Beautiful, and you obviously thought so, too. Enjoyed. Rhiannon
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A moment captured in a flash
A moment captured in a flash of carefully chosen words.
Bee
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A beautiful picture you paint
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A beautiful picture you paint with words Tina.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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A very economic word
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
A very economic word picture that is quite beautiful. I like the phrase 'breasts - tinged pink'; it is very evocative!
HW
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Gorgeous splash of colour.
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Gorgeous splash of colour.
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