'Mourning Orders …' (Poetry Monthly)
By Rhiannonw
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‘Mourning Orders attended to
on receipt of Telegram …’*
… – or text, or email? –
promptly without fail.
Sorrow supplied,
on demand:
our faces command
to feigned grief
for whoever has died,
or to mourn a cause that has crumbled,
or an ancient building that’s tumbled,
or a clever scheme that’s been rumbled –
mourners discreet
dressed soberly, neat
calamity and sadness displayed
by the way we’re arrayed;
or maybe such clothes
for yourself you desire –
provision of mourning attire
to display a formal deep gloom
a sign you’re bereaved,
deprived of a friend, sadly grieved,
(though maybe that one
who has died, and passed on
through trusting has now
to happiness gone) –
such clothes we can tailor up soon
– our records have figures
for height, chest and waist
we’ll attend to your orders in haste,
– on receipt of Telegram …
email or text …
who’s next?
[Poetry Monthly - work on found lists, ads, bills, etc.]
*I was intrigued and amused on stumbling on this advert (written out below, photo above) this week, in a very old (c1930s?) singing festival pamphlet. I thought it might be interesting to think around it in a September Poetry Monthly manner. Rhiannon
EVAN MORRIS & SONS,
40, Great Darkgate Street,
ABERYSTWYTH.
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The Market for Male Attire.
...................................
From the Smallest to Biggest and Youngest to Oldest
at
Lowest Prices and Highest Value.
............................................
Mourning Orders attended to on receipt of
Telegram.
Telephone No. 154 Aberystwyth.
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Rhyme never misses a beat,
Rhyme never misses a beat, swift pace moves you on. It's an intriguing advert you've used - the concept of Westernised mourners as a commodity and I think you've used the advert to good affect here.
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I attend far too many
I attend far too many funerals. ( Don't we all). The dress code is always strictly adhered to, and as you pointed out;
"or maybe such clothes
for yourself you desire –
provision of mourning attire
to display a formal deep gloom
a sign you’re bereaved,"
If one isn't so emotionally upset about the decedent, the black tie and suit will proclaim it. Spot on. That's a great address for an Undertaker.Great Darkgate Street,
Weefatfella.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
I enjoyed reading this - and have found reference to hired mourners for funerals before in my research for my various bits of writing. I play the organ for lots of funerals, and as I sit up in the choir loft, I always look to see if anybody has broken the dress code and come in bright red or gold. But the message of Christianity is that death is a time for rejoicing of the better life that is now being experienced by our friend, so it does please me when I see the bright colours.
Jean
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Another original creation...
Another original creation... and funny!
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This is so interesting,
This is so interesting, Rhiannon...that advertisement you noticed is priceless, and around this you have woven your words, so very expertly. A brilliant example of Poetry Monthly's prompt. Well done on the more than deserved cherries.
Tina
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